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Stay away

Row your boat a shore Michael,
Just stay away from mine.
Rob, Peter,Paul and Mary,
Love these pouty red lips,
one more time.
black widow's kiss,
I am so done.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Camille Morin gold member
    October 21

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    You have an incredible aim, girl!  This one bowls me over.  A hard hitting, interesting and beautifully written little poison dart of a poem.  LOVE it!

     

    CM

  • celadia
    December 14, 2008

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    The anger in this comes straight through. You are of course referring to when you said that others should stay out of America's business, it was a strong statement and not unjustified at all. I am from Canada but was not offended.


    • Rheea gold member
      December 14, 2008
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      you are never rude or unkind Celadia actually this man lives here in the US as a "guest" with all the privileges . Yet he talks about the United States as if it were let us say not the best place to live... yet he is here.