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Never ever

Sitting
side by side;
blooming,
day by day

Chasing our lost dream,
under the umbrella.

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  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    November 22, 2008
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    creatively captivating... x


  • Scyphon
    November 22, 2008

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    Gorgeous take. I love the last lines
    Chasing our lost dream,
    under the umbrella.
    Well done and best of luck to you