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Celestial Chaos





Achilles in bloom
leaves
pearl of dreams
voices
tabled buds
under moon
innumerable, interoperable,
eager mandrake
azure blue
does not grow.

Oh, inquisitive
everything is God's confusion
and ethereal bodies.

During prodigious cosmogony,
myths fell on green eucalyptus,
landed on peach, in spine position,
moon bird melodious
reasoned on principle.









Author notes

~spiritualangel~

Prompt: CHAOS

50 words

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  • Hope Angel silver member
    November 25, 2008

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    I like the images you used to portray chaos. You did a great job, thank you for entering. Have a nice night ♥

  • Kitch
    November 24, 2008

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    well im confused lol. I like the spiritual ideas in this and the description is exquisit. well done.

    good luck

    kitch x