When you feel depleted
and discouraged
take refuge under my umbrella
I am your friend
Author notes
painted by ~ Daeni Pino
A contest entry
- In fifteen words by Lavender Butterfly.
525 points, ended November 23, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
1 - 8 of 8
-
Wonderful
Hello Beautiful
You have writen a beautiful poem.
I know how hard it is to write something that will give the reader a "aha" emotion, something that will take your breath away in only 15 words...very hard to achieve, but you my friend have captured just that.
'The umbrella of friendship', I love the way your words painted that vision.
I wish you well with your writings my friend, may your quill never run dry!
Much love and happiness to you
-
This is such a sweet poem. So comforting and cute.
-
Oh wow! This was amazing. I loved it. So very sweet. Keep it flowing
Much love
Ylova
-
That is nice to know. Good work on the poem and the picture with this!
-
i love how you read the emotional context of the painting and interpreted it. this is very nice.
-
Very sweet.
-
how sweet... x
-
I really didn't even look at this painting in this way. Thanks for opening my eyes just a little bit more.
Adding your comment:
1 - 8 of 8
