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Caskets

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Pretty body boxes
holding loved ones
Discretely adorned
Roses, crosses
praying hands
They vary in size
from adult to
youth and infant
R.I.P. in style

A contest entry

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  • The Fun House silver member
    December 14, 2008

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    Ah, macabre! I can dig it!  Creatively done and it has a wonderfully flow going throughout the piece. It sure does get the mind rolling with the theme. Excellent job here.


  • HaleyMary
    November 23, 2008

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    Dark write. Powerful imagery in this piece and I thought the ending was powerful. It kind of hits the reader at the end of how powerful death is in society. Thanks for sharing and best of luck in the contest.