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cloudy

hello my dear,
i hold you near,
as you whisper
so sweet and dear,
i love you
you make me sweat
ever so wet
I don't regret
what you do to me
pull me close
beyond reproach
you are my coach
as you flounder
in the sunshiny things
that leave us cloudy

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  • Nicolette gold member
    November 22, 2008

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    Lovely subtle sensuality here. Made me think of the old Oriental saying of "rain and clouds" for "you-know-what" !!

    ~ Nicolette