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Divine Connection

Connection divine,
between two beautiful creations;
engaged sensual simplicity.
Matter's importance without time.


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  • SimplySonnets gold member
    April 10, 2009

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    How we would all like to make that divine connection

    I like this, it has depth and insight.

    When it happens the world stops, indeed life is without time.


  • Lavender Butterfly
    November 23, 2008
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    this is expressively engaging... x


  • afroqban
    November 22, 2008
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    you nailed this! love the last line, the word -- Matter's-- gave it color. much love