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on the Wings of a Bird

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On the wings of a bird I go flying
Flying right into the night
Soaring in the clear blue yonder
With the stars and the moon as my guide

Way up there I wing my way over
The oceans and meadows of green
I glide over all that is sleeping
And wonder at all I have seen

On the wings of a bird I am sailing
On the wings that will take me up high
Up there where silence is golden
On the wings of a bird I will fly

I will glide where no danger can chase me
I will fly where no troubles can go
I will wing my way into tomorrow
And leave not a trace down below

I will fly on the wings that are lifting
And glide my way up to the sun
I will wing my way right through the darkness
Till morning when light shadows come

On the wings of a bird I go flying
Flying right into the night
In my dreams I will soar through the heavens
And all that I see will be right

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  • DogFish silver member
    December 25, 2008
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    beautiful!

    ...obviously the sentiments of a "condor"!


    • condor gold member
      December 25, 2008
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      Thanks, mate. Yep. Sometimes i wish i were a bird and could go join them on their flights.

  • Clovis...Curious silver member
    December 11, 2008

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    Superb

    A very fine write, indeed. Imagery; rhythm and rhyme are just fine. Thanks for sharing this one with us.

  • Rose Angel gold member
    November 29, 2008

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    Such a spiritually inspiring write of hope,peace, liberation....Every line is precious to me....It is wonderful to be able to rise above the world here and fly into the realm where this world no longer has it's power to affect us. Beautifully rhymed, flowing write dear Lee...Bookmarked again!


  • paw-writer silver member
    November 23, 2008

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    What a freeing and uplifting poem you have penned here! I really needed to read this today. This write feels so soothing and peaceful. Just what I imagine it would really feel like to fly freely. Great job, and thanks so much for sharing this. Blessings, Patty

  • scoff
    November 23, 2008

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    Wonderful write.

    I can remember as a child I used to stand in the wind when it blew real hard, close my eyes and spread my arms, imagining I was flying. You write about something almost everyone can relate to, and you make it magical.

    Very well done.


  • DolceVito gold member
    November 23, 2008

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    This is another brilliant write of yours....I feel like I've read this before, not sure, but still an extraordinary write and enjoyable read.

  • jadeangyal
    November 22, 2008

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    "On the wings of a bird I am sailing
    On the wings that will take me up high
    Up there where silence is golden
    On the wings of a bird I will fly"
    This stanza is my favorite. I like the "silence is golden" part. Because the sky is also golden, like in your picture. So it had a double meaning for me. Beautiful rhyme and meter.


  • Cheroscirit
    November 22, 2008

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    This is really, really goods. It makes me want to go fly with youu. It also brings a sensee of peace to the reader. Great job and keep up the hard work!


  • YoursTrulyJulie gold member
    November 22, 2008

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    Ahhhh...

    Wouldn't it be wonderful to soar like a bird. Your write almost took me in flight, use of great imagery did the trick Well penned


  • rbruce gold member
    November 22, 2008

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    I remember this as one of those you had posted a while ago. Very positive outlook "And all that I see will be right". rhythmflow and rhyme all seem great. A great poem anyway, well done.


    • condor gold member
      November 22, 2008
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      Yep. It is indeed. Thanks again! lol!!!!
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