blowing them hard
against the wind,
hitting grass,
they are catapulted,
big brother's strength
Author notes
painted by ~ Daeni Pino
A contest entry
- In fourteen words by Lavender Butterfly.
550 points, ended November 23, 2008, 13 entries
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A beautifully written piece. Wonderful take on the prompt!
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creatively expressive... x
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Awww...such lovely words....remind me of my toddlers playing together. brother and sister...
Beautiful write!
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hey, do your toddlers play nice? if so i will have to get some pointers, haha.... mine are very competitive, but still sweet...
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My daughter is 5 nad son will be 3 next month..
They are fine most of teh time...like to play with each other....their quarells are not even as long as I scold them, they are back together and playing...
Son wants all of sister's toys sometimes, since he is younger one, I tell my daughter that she is the elder sister..she takes it well sometimes..then I can distract my son..
still stubborn definitely call for sterner moments.
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