Time
Slips By Ever
So Slowly
Alone
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Time
We Pray For It
To Slow
Together
Author notes
By ~ Maxboy
Painting Prompt By ~ Daeni Pino ~ In Fifteen Words
In a list
A contest entry
- In fifteen words by Lavender Butterfly.
525 points, ended November 23, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
~PLEASE COMMENT~
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This ain't bad, atleast I think so!
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Thanks sweetie, I will change that, I was mad at myself because I knew it wasn't what she was looking for.
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I don't think this is bad at all! It holds much truth and once again you have said so much with brevity. A beautiful little piece
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Thank you for the applause and your wonderful comment, I am happy you enjoyed it. I know what she was after and I didn't deliver, I was upset at myself, but I do thank you.
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How beautifully creative... x
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Thank you, but you are being to kind, I let "TIME" slip by. Sorry!
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