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Hermit

with just the clothes on my back
the soul in my heart
I'm a straggler
loner

take what you will

these things add up,
you know?
I lost my place
and found it
seeming
and seething reality

A contest entry

Anything that can help me make it better..

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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  • Dalaney gold member
    November 28, 2008

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    Thank you very much
    for your entry. I appreciate
    your time and effort. Well done.
    Love, Lane