Shining in the sun,
multicolored bubbles;
Gone with the wind,
like our childhoods.
Author notes
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A contest entry
- In fourteen words by Lavender Butterfly.
550 points, ended November 23, 2008, 13 entries
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Comments
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How engaging..great take on the prompt!
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this is very pretty. i love the picture of multicolored bubbles. so pretty!and i love how you compared it to childhood. something so light and fragile and beautiful simply floats away on the wind. <3 awesome job.
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Creatively expressive... x
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