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Remnant in air



Blow of delight,
rainbow bubbles,
dreamy flight,

hearts blossom
even annums later,
beyond childhood annals.





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  • Alyzeh
    December 11, 2008

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    Awww..this was delightful! I love the background too Firdous!


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    November 23, 2008
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    This is just wonderfully delightful... x


  • Melodies
    November 22, 2008

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    Well is this pretty or WHAT? YES!



    An adorable poem, said in such a way it melts the reader's heart.


    • crimsondew
      November 23, 2008
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      Your comment melted my heart..
      Thank you for your lovely words


  • Sandra R Reynolds gold member
    November 22, 2008
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    Beautiful


  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    November 22, 2008

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    beautiful honey, I love the heart in these words. good luck


    whisper

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