Caressing golden bud,
gaze dipped in ardor
sighing
for dream petals
unfurl,
coyly.
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A contest entry
- In thirteen words by Lavender Butterfly.
550 points, ended November 23, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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gaze dipped in ardor. Nice, reminds me of chocolate! Fits with the petals of a rose dipped in choc.
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delicious comment for me!Thanks~
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creatively engaging... x
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really flowing sweet
love the way you express it
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Thank you!
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oh wow honey, this is beautiful, the last two lines drip with anticipation. good luck
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whisper
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Thanks..some things are worth waiting...
Have a nice day!
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