her gaze
cast ultimate judgement
as we wait
for her acceptance
quiet murmurs
Author notes
Pic by ~ Amalia
In a list
A contest entry
- In thirteen words by Lavender Butterfly.
550 points, ended November 23, 2008, 13 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This made me think of highschool.
How we all wait for the "queen bee" to pass judgement and determine how we will spend the rest of our time at school.
Shari
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Congrats on the bronze !
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This seems so fitting and realistic... x
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Anticipation well done here!
Good luck!
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