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Our First Year Together

 

It was just one year ago,

you asked me to join with you,

I always thought you were the best,

and felt that we were blessed.

 

 

 

 

You are someone who understands me,

and helped to set my spirit free,

in time you knew me inside out,

and learned what I was all about.

 

 

Our love together we did share,

yet time to us seemed unfair,

for you my love are my dream come true,

and I am lucky to be loved by you.

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

This is for my inspiration; My Hetane Moodayo-Okohke. Today was our first anniversary. He was lost to me in January when he was killed, but he lives in my heart still. Namehotaste na Hetane your Hemeoone still loves you, you are truely missed.

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  • Spiritvision angel
    January 11

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    Heartfelt write my friend. I have been gone for awhile and am sorry for your loss. With every breeze feel the love that he sends to wrap around you.


  • Soulful Woman silver member
    January 10

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    A beautiful and heartfelt piece of writing. I am sure you will have his spirit with you forever.
    Take care my friend...
    Soulful Woman


    • freespirit51
      January 10
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      Soulful Woman

      Thanks again for your wonderful words. This was written for a special person and he is very well missed and still loved.

  • celadia
    December 14, 2008
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    This is beautiful and sad at the same time when we know what happened to him.


  • Swan song gold member
    December 5, 2008
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    You know this was one heck of a true to heart love poem! Excellent write


  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    November 25, 2008

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    Holds my sister close and wipes the tears from her heart

     

    your tender words of love will always be remembered and his love for you everlasting

     

    nemehotatse na sister of na hesta

  • PureCountry
    November 23, 2008

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    Wonderful Thoughtful Tribute

    to one you continue to hold dear and close. My thoughts and prayers are with you at this time. May the balm of Gilead flow, bathing your heart.

    Respectfully,
    Silent Hawk


  • arafura gold member
    November 23, 2008
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    You are in my thoughts. Stay brave!


  • Rose Angel gold member
    November 22, 2008

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    Before I don't get a chance, I want to reflect and say this is just beautiful.. Always remembering which is such a tribute to him...Remembered by those who loved and respected him...Truly he was a great man...Wonderful dedication!

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