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Dance

Atmospheric euphoria;
Surrounds her caressed skin
Sensing solitude beyond solace
She strives to become wondrous

Follow her through finely intricate moves;
Intoxicating characterization of her destiny
Graceful; she portrays a story not yet told

Undeniably; this is where she truly belongs
And yet, held back by possessive percipients;
Tis true


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50 Word prompt- Dance

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  • Scyphon
    November 22, 2008
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    Beautifully written, I love the second stanza. Best of luck to you


  • Hope Angel silver member
    November 22, 2008

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    Your explained the world of dance unbelievably well. I really like this, and I can really relate. Thanks for entering.