"Sticks and stones may
break my bones,
but words will never
hurt me."
Your words are more like razors,
which hurt more than any stick could.
Your tongue is like a canon,
spitting stones out at me.
And I could do the same in return,
but I'll never be that shallow.
Author notes
Word Choice: Shallow.
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A contest entry
- Word Prompts Quickie by Hope Angel.
525 points, ended November 25, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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you know i love how that i know who these poems are bout everytime i read them and your such a good writer and you know we don't talk much lately and i miss it, were going on two years of how long we've known each other things can be rough between us but you are a great person crystal, you know how to make someone happy and someday i hope you have all the happiness in the world for yourself...so you can be happy..i love you hunny now and forever<3.
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You about made me cry cause Im a little sad today and just feeling like im losing the whole world. Thanks babe. You are so amazing, dont ever change. <3 I miss talking to you too! Your so sweet. I love you too, for now and all of eternity.
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Good job and I know that you are not like this love you loads take care sweety good luck in the contest be well
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Thanks. Love you loads too.
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I'm glad that you aren't that shallow. I like your take on the prompt, and how you put a qoute in at the beggining. I love you and thanks for entering
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Thanks. I love you too. And your welcome.
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