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Inspection

Ripping and
Tearing and
Beating beliefs apart again
This voice of
Dissent is
Going for the heart again
Perception
Perspective
Where are you looking? Look again
Your inspection's
Misdirected
Look inside you'll see
You have the wrong
Conception
Intention misguided
Your fears have decided
You'll live life unguided
Sane mind? You've denied it
Escapes that you've tried and
The pain that you're hiding
It's time to switch sides now
Stop the unwitting suicide
You live you life from
Day to day
Never any growth always
Time to play
.................

Author notes

Dis'n is another criticism piece. Only I'm targeting myself this time, in a wicked turn of events. WOO dramatic. It's unfinished. Lots unfinished.

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  • bleedingspidrlegs
    December 6, 2008
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    Lovely

    It's different then usual, but still good. Heading home soon, so I'll straighten you out!