My perfect partner has a nonstop pathway to my heart.
She never strays too far away and always does her part
to fix my food and scratch my itchy back
and buff the polish on my Cadillac.
Even if I search in every corner of the land
I’ll never find a partner as perfect as my hand.
A contest entry
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900 points, ended November 30, 2008, 17 entries
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hmm
you must be double jointed, enjoyed the write
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Hm well done... here I am thinking what a great lady you have found... until I’ll never find a partner as perfect as my hand.... nice one
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I am glad you took the time to list all the things you are looking for in a partner.
To me the perfect partner would be one that is caring and understanding.
Riftkin
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LOL!
This is so funny! 
What a great write! You had me going there. I started to read & wasn't paying attention really to the title! I was thinking 'til that last line you were talking about a wife & I thought: Man...buffing the Cadillac!
This should do quite fine in the Contest! You get a 
from me! 
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Lol!
What a funny poem this is ...
God bless you ...
May peace offer you her hand ...
~ James ~
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