1
That long?
I said to myself
We made love
and you left
Before
yesterday’s bananas
were ripened
2
If you rub on my mangos
and I play with your oranges
Do you think we could have
a pomegranate?
3
In lust
I kissed
your cantaloupes
but it was hard eating
your water melon
4
Yes I’m older
and my wrinkled raisins
were once
plump grapes.
How do you explain
Your prunes?
In a list
A contest entry
- 20-100 words -59th Contest/Quickie/No PIF/ by Spiritualangel by spiritualangel.
650 points, ended December 23, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Nice. Best of luck.
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lol, i am not touching that last part, lol, but this was something, keep it flowing, i did enjoyed this and good luck in the contest
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LOL, i enjoyed this lots. gl in your contest


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Cute.
A cool comparison.
Best of luck!





