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VIGNETTE comparing sex to fruit





1
That long?
I said to myself

We made love
and you left

Before
yesterday’s bananas
were ripened

2

If you rub on my mangos
and I play with your oranges

Do you think we could have
a pomegranate?

3
In lust
I kissed
your cantaloupes

but it was hard eating
your water melon

4

Yes I’m older
and my wrinkled raisins
were once
plump grapes.

How do you explain
Your prunes?






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  • spiritualangel
    December 23, 2008
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    Nice. Best of luck.


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    November 23, 2008

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    lol, i am not touching that last part, lol, but this was something, keep it flowing, i did enjoyed this and good luck in the contest


  • afroqban
    November 23, 2008
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    LOL, i enjoyed this lots. gl in your contest


  • Lj-
    November 22, 2008
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    Cute.
    A cool comparison.

    Best of luck!