What a romantic coincidence we have now
after almost a decade of our departure in sorrow
Time made us unwise in taking decisions
and age blindly followed those directions
You are a perfect partner to me my dear!
none else in this aspect can win over
Your nectar springing lips
never rejected my umpteen trips
The love you showered and the affection you rained
still wave weaves gently into me heart without being refrained
We are made for each other and hence may be mad for each other too
Thank God ,our realization of each others minds,to woo
made us to swim together at least now in a smooth row
Author notes
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A contest entry
- Check inside to see by Riftkin.
900 points, ended November 30, 2008, 17 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I am glad you took the time to list all the things you are looking for in a partner.
To me the perfect partner would be one that is caring and understanding.
Riftkin
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The blending of two souls in perfections is what I get from this...excellent writing and beautiful visions given......
novy
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beautiful
Hello my dear friend, much love to you.
I have just finished reading your poem, and it truly is so beautiful.
Your words are soft and warm, and gives the reader a heart felt feeling ,when reading your words.
You have painted a loving picture of 'devotion' in the mind of the reader.
A woman would be ever so pleased to receive such a tribute as yours.
I wish you all the best in the contest.
Be blessed my dear friend, and much love and happiness to you always.
Your loving AP angel friend,
~Angel-anne~
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OMG! How honest ... beautiful.
~ What unadulterated passion ... ~
~ Very impressive! ~
~ You painted the most divine picture of your loves true divinity you share together between the two of you.. ~
God bless your love-provide for you both-yes may it carry you ...
always;- ~
~ James ~
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