Reality for Me

What keeps me going are these notions

The shapes of things is key and their motions

Time for me is just us counting certain motions

of the earth relative to the sun and the oceans

Thing is, it all moves in a purposeful direction

It's all so complicated under our inspection

Without saying what did all of this to you

It is not dumb, isn't that true? I'm through!

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Spirituality Challenge by dustytiger. 900 points, ended November 29, 2008, 14 entries
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Wickedruby1
August 7

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Great
We are all subject to the nature of the universe, if it should change because of the need the government feels to play with the elements, and the world of mother nature.
norahlogan
January 12

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Brilliant!!
I like the layers of meaning here. Watching externally and internally on the physical plane. Bravo, Ellis! This is so deceptively simple!
Pete Greenslade
November 23, 2008
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clever amusing and perceptive good luck ...peter
smonte19124
November 22, 2008

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Once again your beautiful words are leaving a warm comfortable feeling deep down inside and I thank you for that. God Bless, Jo-Ann
Melodies
November 22, 2008

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Your ending made me chuckle. I think you are a philosopher, Ellis. You might enjoy going off in the woods and living by a stream and going fishing. You could have a wood burning stove and a big feather bed with a puffy comforter and big pillows. You would have an easy chair and.... WHAT ELSE? You decide. No, I am not spamming. I am thinking how much I like your poetry.
Mariana
November 22, 2008

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I really enjoyed this..thank you for sharing it with us all
Mariana
dustytiger
November 22, 2008

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this is so beautiful, i loved it, it's what i wanted something very deep and spiritual without being in your face, thank you for the entry