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Loves Puppet

Invisible cords hold my heart
Connections of emotions lead unto you
Watching and waiting for the things you do
Cant escape this twine that binds
holding me here cause love is so blind

Yesterday I vowed I would walk away
One flick of your hair and I again stay
Feel like a puppet in a tragedy play
Mute and sad I have nothing to say
so release me now so I can go out and play

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  • Confusedboy
    November 22, 2008
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    Very true, for many of us are another puppets. We respond to their every command. lol.


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    November 22, 2008

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    ain't think the truth, ain't it the truth, lol, i think this is golden, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest