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Opposites attract.

Left and right,
Day and night,
Having a heart to heart
Or just being cheek to cheek.

Holding tightly to the fact
That we're so different,
Yet so alike.
We should probably hate eachother,
Or at least fight,
A million to one we shouldn't be together.
And if I'm honest
I'll like those odd,
I'll take the risk!

And if it's true
That opposites attract,
Can I be your opposite forever?

Author notes

Not sure if I like this one tbh.

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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  • Brilliant Blonde22
    November 24, 2008
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    o so fabulous


  • XxThe devils angelxX
    November 23, 2008
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    wow....

    omg its amazing. maybe just space the middle paragraph. but i love it


  • alexandra.
    November 22, 2008

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    I like it, I love the first stanza, love the last stanza, and love the last four lines of the middle bit.

    I dunno, it seems a little forced, but I like lots despite, or perhaps because of, it.

    loveyou.
    xxx.