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Was it Just a Dream.

I have had a Dream,
What did it mean?
The world has died,
Has our dearest God lied

I was sure it wasn’t time,
At least for sure not mine
As I was lying dead alone,
And the wind had slowly Blown

I wanted to wonder,
But It started to thunder
Was it a sign from God thee one,
Or just something he has done?

I have felt very cold perhaps lost,
This was a dream of the very most
What did it mean,
Was it just a dream?

As I was sitting on my bed,
My mind was surely not fed
Was I still dreaming,
What was all of this meaning

I have dreamed of death,
Was it really my last breath?
Or am I not to worry, 
And just live in Glory?

Till the time comes either way,
And no matter what , I shall not stay
I am clearly not that young,
But perhaps its my lung

I have troubled with all my life,
I have never even had a wife
It was just a dream,
I hope it didn’t mean …

If you every wake like me
And think of thee
Remember you’re  here,
And do not ever fear.

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  • poetrandy
    November 29, 2008

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    Very nice poem!

    I like your rhymes and rhythm in this poem! This fine spiritual work is well written and meaningful, Good work for one of your first postings! Keep writing and posting -- I want to see more of your work?

    • Tulie
      December 3, 2008
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      Thank You

      Thank You very Much.
      Yeah okay Ill try posting some more.
      Thank you very much for the comment again!.