anticipation
echoes across miles
nerve ends
pulled taut
strained emotions
sing concerto
countdown
to take off beats red
while tomorrows memories
wait patiently in this
photo album of my mind
Author notes
prompt ~ almost there
30 words or less
A contest entry
- almost there by going nowhere.
900 points, ended November 23, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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nicely done... like a stretching to reach, but just cant get there... having to hold the memories in your mind until you get there. thank you
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This write conjures feelings of suspense. An excellent job of capturing these thoughts in such few lines. Your word choice is spot-on. Thank you for sharing.
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Enjoyed this very much! Thanks for sharing!
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Very nice thoughts spilled here, mind wanderings are so much fun
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