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Nearer, Nearer I Recall

 

 

How faithful few can ocstracize so deep
Absorbing conscience to nocturnal sleep,
Sheltered haunts that movement the abyss
Where cancerous obsessions, reminisce!

Hopes reflect in what the looking glass
Shall fantasize still further, tears alas,
Will stir all those reminders one facade
Having not, what hopes before have played. 

Drifting glides upon the black-top sheen
Of surface that was once a beauty queen,
Crouched in what appears to disarray
Mirror, mirror on the wall, who stray?

The lyrical but often words I've dread
Flee never was my saying so instead
Mirror mirror on the wall, who stares?
Time moves on, a younger one prepares.

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  • eternalsol
    November 23, 2008
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    beautiful

    beautiful wright thnx so much for entring my contest


  • sunoir
    November 23, 2008
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    the price of vanity, love the way you weave your words. kudos


  • SimplyNoodle
    November 23, 2008
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    wow wow

    wonderfull amzing write! and out standing use of words!

  • piccola silver member
    November 22, 2008

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    I have a graphic that would be wonderful except that it's in color. Your graphic is great too though. I just got it through one of my graphic clubs ... this write seems perfect. Do you ever do any other form?


  • Swangrnv gold member
    November 22, 2008
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    oh my...

    damn my man this is outstanding! I'm bookmarking this it's a classic..

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