You look but you don’t see
The wicked and angry side of her
Wanting to destroy all that crosses her path
Hiding from inside the world of purity
Hated words never to be spoken
Blood rending wounds wide open
Festering pustules beneath flesh
Leering teeth battered and broken
Smiling sweetly so gentle and kind
Singing tunes of Godly songs
While the Devil smolders and wait
Beautiful façade hides the evil behind
Men fall willingly at her feet
To do her biding with all due hast
Women with jealous cause to hate
Both loosing their souls in defeat
Look closer and you will see
The other side of her
Waiting hungry and relentless
Hiding from inside the world of purity
Author notes
Option #1: Wright about the picture what ever comes to mind when you look at it
A contest entry
- picture me by eternalsol.
700 points, ended December 7, 2008, 20 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Yipees!
Jeepers! This is a monster, isn't it? Blood curdling strong description!
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Thank you very much for reading and commenting. I wanted a change from what I usually write. LOL God Bless, Jo-Ann
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alsome i like how you touck the pic and gave it a life a sotry if you will i wont to thank you for entering my contest i enjoyed reading you poem
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Let me be the one to thank you for having the contest and for taking the time to comment. God Bless, Jo-Ann
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A thought provoking take on the picture prompt.
Bravo!
Mariana
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Every now and then got to let the dark side run free.
Thank you my friend for taking the time to visit and leaving kind words. God Bless, Jo-Ann
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Look at you and your old school rhyme scheme. And you really pulled it off too making it very professional, entertaining (to the eyes), without the need for filler words making the scribe to over done. My gosh I love reading your work. Much love and respect.
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I so like the way you talk Thank you my friend and God Bless Always, Jo-Ann
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You have nailed it in style, impact, etc...you have just nailed it in my humble opinion
good luck to you in the contest
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Your opinion is very important to me and I thank you from the bottom of my heart. God Bless, Jo-Ann
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