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Revolved Emotions

 

 

Drift into the voice of inconceivable notions

where love melts upon a lover's tongue.


Dreams glide my feet to the tune of your heart

Our breath lifted hope from earths floor, flinging it to

the south east wind.


In the mist of eternal bliss you placed me in your soul

where home, family and all that is divinity resides there,

filling my soul with warmth from a hearth of love.


In the myths of Ireland you kissed my lips so pure,

danced a tune of legends and made our dreams come true.


As innocence lingered in the look of Irish green

love made the rivers flow from my lips to yours.




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image titled - mists of change by Angela Cox


Sorry I know that it's weird and may not fit the picture but.. Thats what I saw.. I tried, lol..

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  • LadyDementia gold member
    December 9, 2008

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    Congrats on the HM!

    Wonderful warm imagery, such a tenderness within your words. Beautifully done. Congrats on the HM


  • Thornz
    December 8, 2008

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    You have a beautiful way with words. Very beautiful piece, I read this a few times trying to pick a favorite line, but I can't cause every line is my favorite. Thank you for sharing this.


  • lacef
    December 7, 2008
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    very good

    No it doesn't the pic. But I love the poem.


  • innocence jaded.xx
    December 6, 2008

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    Well, I haven't read some of your poetry in a long time, so now I'm breaking that, and I read this, and fawk. This was plain flat out brilliant.

    -In the mist of eternal bliss you placed me in your soul

    where home, family and all that is divinity resides there,

    filling my soul with warmth from a hearth of love.
    ...

    & that was just wow. Incredible; I love the vocabulary in those lines, and the imagery in there, too. Beautiful.♥


  • thepoetssoul
    December 6, 2008

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    Tis a most wonderful piece of poetry.
    The imagery is so soft and inviting.
    Such beauty and peace you have penned.
    Thanks for sharing your heart and soul.

    Tony


  • Hostage
    December 5, 2008

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    I love this ..
    I like the peace that came over me while I read it ..
    "you placed me in your soul
    where home, family and all that is divinity resides there"
    is my fav line
    I don't think I would change a thing


  • Grey Mouser
    November 27, 2008

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    Wonderful imagery that takes hold and showers with intent the reader. Showing the magic involved in love. Thanks for entering into the contest.
    Be well and be blessed,
    Mouser


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    November 23, 2008

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    What a beautiful poem you created from the picture. Very eloquently written. I really like the Ireland reference. Best of luck in the contest.


  • maralisa silver member
    November 23, 2008

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    a wonderful poem on ireland lovlely imagery good luck in the contest marailsa


  • Pammers
    November 23, 2008

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    In my opinion I think the picture does make sense with the poem, the green hill (just like in Ireland as you wrote about) and the pretty dog free and wandering (like love does) your write is a brilliant interpretation of the picture. Very inspiring. I loved your write! Keep up the great work! and good luck in the contest! -Pammie


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    November 22, 2008

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    you did more then tried, you succeeded with this, it is an amazing poem, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest

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