Too Bad.

That's too bad--

at night, you see me

still angled above you

& fucking pretty.

That's a shame--

You're eyes close

& I'm the optical illusion

you just can't forget.

What a pity--

It's his arms around me,

stroking my skin so softly

& making love to me.

Get over it--I did.

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Free Verse and Free Reign To Tell Someone To... by Dalaney. 950 points, ended November 28, 2008, 14 entries
Honorable mention
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Just Let Go by Gay-Militant. 2200 points, ended January 23, 12 entries
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Gay-Militant
January 23

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hahahahahahaha! i love this. the attitude definitely speaks to me. But remember though. Sex is more than just a fuck, its a feeling.
You don't have to try this, but i urge the next time you are intimate with someone, let your emotions take control over the physical pleasure. let yourself go completely and in the end, you will walk away a stronger more confident person and maybe holding hands with someone else. I used to think of sex as sex and not the integral part of a relationship, but i was wrong. it really is. it is the one time with that person you are truly vulnerable. If you let that be your strength and not your weakness, any marriage, relationship, partnership whatever will be stronger. When you find the right person, try this, and you will not regret it.

as for the poem. totally kick ass. loved it.
- xxRainbowDawnxx
  January 24
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  lol xd
  it's all cool no I do go with the emotions, I'm ALL about the emotions. This is just to hurt him, really. As he hurt me.
  Thanks though for the comment
Dalaney
November 28, 2008

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ce la vie
What I enjoyed most about this poem
was that the narrator obviously moved on
and left the whining behind.
Good entry. Love, Lane
Disturbed Prodigy
November 22, 2008
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i wonder who you are addressing this to, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest, my friend