Dear Anna,
My angel, I know that you love me, but how can I tell you about what is going on?
When I see all of this hatred I can't stop but to think only you.
With these scars that I have, from the blood on my body dripping down on the falling ones.
This is my curse, this my time to say good-bye don't cry, don't worry. This is my sacrifice for you, my Anna.
I'm doing this for you, I'm doing this for our son.
I might have scars, I might have agony with each step I take.
My boot on the ground, my head at the rest as I write you this, my last farewell.
Shh, now, hold on tight, I can see you crying.
As I walk into the room, seeing you read this. I know that I'm not perfect but I know what's right.
Is to end my life, to see, to wait, to be with you again.
Right into Heaven's wings we will be there, only the difference is, is that our wings will be unfolded.
This is my time, this is my way, to tell you how much I'll forever love you.
I know it hurts, I know your heart bleeds but rest now.
As my hand is on your shoulders.
Please, stop sobbing, my spirit will forever be with you.
This is my sacrifice for you, I'm bleeding for you.
With my gun on the floor as my last breathe holds just to write you this.
Anna, I love...don't let go of me just yet. Heal this body with the bleeding wound, but don't let go of me just yet.
Author notes
This was from number four Last leter home to a love one contest entery.
This poem I'll let the reader think of what really happens
A contest entry
- November's New Member Contest by AP Greeters.
700 points, ended December 6, 2008, 34 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Welcome to Allpoetry and thank you for entering the contest
I like that you left it to our imagination. To allow us to believe that she held on and believed and healed his wounds with the binds of her love.
Welcome to Allpoetry and thank you for entering our contest
I hope that you enjoy the site, and if you have any questions please don't hesitate to ask
Good luck!
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Welcome to AllPoetry
I found the raw emotions expressed in this as you wrote as though you were watching over her incredibly touching and heartbreaking
So much love is penned here, and it flows quite well down the page
Good write mate
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Enjoy AllPoetry
Thank You & Best of Luck
Stay safe
~Manda
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welcome to allpoetry
thanks for entering the contest, thanks for sharing this with us here, good luck to you,
cheers
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Welcome to AllPoetry
This is cute
"the different is" - that should be "difference".
I think the "our wings will be unfolded." part is brilliant
Seems like you really felt this one. Good luck
~Diana
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Thank you, I want to be a great poet someday, thanks for the correction its in the poem now.
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Welcome to Allpoetry
This is beautiful, a heartwrenching message from one who knows that the end is nigh. You've done a brilliant job at keeping your tone and language appropriate, and I know that this'll stick with me for a while.
Well done, and thanks for entering!
Laura
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Welcome to Allpoetry!
This is a heartbreaking poem - and I really like where you have taken the prompt however I think that this could do with some editing, for example the line: "With this scars that I have" doesn't make grammatical sense - it should be "with this scarthat I have" or "with these scars that I have" ... but apart from that the sentiment of this poem is very strongly expressed thank you very much for entering the new members contest!
Polly
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Awsome job!!! Loved it!
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Welcome to All Poetry
A sad write. Thank you for sharing this with us, best of luck in the contest.
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