When your one look
answers a million of my
most pressing questions
you know its time
to unleash some concern;
for who else will with rapt
fraughtless attention
measure up to your plumbline?
When your one touch
lights my skies for days on end
and I begin to have faith again
when should I expect
a hidden shark to dig in
must I with eyes wide shut
out step the coming rut?
Your touch I need, but will it impede?
When with just one of your timely words
spoken ever so softly splinters my world whole
is there any wonder that my grasp is tight
that I shadow you lovingly day and night?
Is there a mystery, my dear innocent sweet?
to why I cling to you with both hands and feet?
Haven't you gotten the gist of this all by now
that this love must last, must stay, somehow.
In a list
A contest entry
- LOVE ME NOT by Whispering Wind.
700 points, ended December 6, 2008, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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so soft and filled with love and yet showing that little fear of loosing that someone so dear...thank you for entering and for sharing


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Thank you so much for this lovely response
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A lovely write appreciative of one close to your heart. Every words touches the heart and lingers like a gentle caress. Well done my friend and thank you. God Bless, Jo-Ann


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Thanks so much Jo-Ann, I really appreciate your comments
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Very lovely, so smooth and sweet. Yuck, I hate all the mush. LOL Just kidding. Great poem.
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Mush taste good hahaha with a little seasoning
lol thanks Z
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Sigh...
I love love poetry and admire your poem so much, dear one. 

Sweetly said and from the author's heart.


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Thanks Melodies, you are ever so kind, keep that trait lol
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