My anger brims over and a rage so red envelops my soul
Can you see me?
Can you hear me?
I work so hard to be kind and good
But all I do is fail
Can you feel my pain?
I light my candle
Burn my soul with Holy Fire that I may feel you again.
I know you are there forever watching me
Like Thomas I sometimes need a sign that you are listening to me.
I know when you sit and I know when you stand I know everything about you
my dear dear child
I am always with you.
Author notes
O God! please spare a little time for me. Lovely prompt.
A contest entry
- please spare little time... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
400 points, ended December 6, 2008, 17 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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Ah..I like the intensity and the end of this loving piece..well done..and thanks for the entry..
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As i read i realize I am at a loss for words. Such sadness in this prayer. Peace is all I can say.
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