ami jani na tumi koto dhur cheye thakte paro
haat barate paro;
shujer j alo ache
tar'o ekta shima ache.
i don't know for how long you can stare
extend your hands;
sun has light
and it has its limitations.
A contest entry
- almost there by going nowhere.
900 points, ended November 23, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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almost like we can reach them, but never will... unique take on the prompt. thank you
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Wow! Very cool, very original...Good luck!
All the best, Ocean.
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