porcelain skin
masquerading cracks
as she shows the people
she loves,
yes,
she loves,
she has been here before,
beauty charged for continence,
and her soul was left dangling,
in the winds of her regret,
she has been here before,
and she loves,
with her beauty,
that is a deity amongst the day,
she loves
and is loved
strangers try to comprehend
but life suckles from the vine
and no matter what your reasonings are...
she loves.
she loves
Author notes
prompt is mythical beauty
In a list
A contest entry
- I'm Goin' on a Muse Hunt by checkmate-.
400 points, ended November 30, 2008, 13 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Oooh, great job! The word choice was spectacular, and I love the last stanza, and the repitition throughout the whole poem. The last two lines put a great conclusion to the poem.
Good luck and thanks for entering! -
very good
i liked this alot and thought it was well written
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