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The clutch of death is waiting
and I am almost there. . .
Few are the years I have now
to live and love and share. . .


every dawn sees my time dwindle.


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  • going nowhere
    November 23, 2008
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    this had that sad underlying tone that i search to find some hope. knowing the end is nearing gives the time to let those you love know, as one knows they should each moment they breathe. i also believe that almost being there is reason to hope. thank you for this thoughtful entry


  • oceanbluize
    November 22, 2008
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    Spellbinding...and captivating. Great piece, thank you for sharing...best of luck, ocean!