~ "I always wanted to share this ...
truly;- and finally now, I-thank
God, because brought before
me I have found it". ~
~ I wanted to know the genuine
advantage, precious honor and gift;-
honesty of heart, simple beauty and-
joy, innocence of spirit;- and greater
desire, and respect of a tenderness sincere.
The over all uniqueness of
sharing my world;- singularly ...
with only her. ~
~ Treasuring the evidence, apparent-
of-her, and of me;- revealed in-our hopes,
feelings and ambitions, dreams,
moving with a love true, open,
and-willing, never forced, misgiven. ~
~ One that saw the partnership maturing;-
nurturing and complimenting the better
part of the others' right, to their individuality,
working to remain fully aware, accepting the
imperfections through bold compassion,
and patience, advancing over-time, becoming
something our prayers' and hopes' would be
proud, to defend;- make complete;- together,
working intently for an eminent love, and joy;-
and certain peace, moving in unity, freedom,
patience and faith;- striving always to protect it,
and with all our hearts, upholding and edifying
the beauty of the others';- thanking God every
day for this simple life of love moving with a
singleness of purpose. ~
~ One that is truly I feel ... ~
~ something one in-the-same. ~
Author notes
~ Thank you Jenny:- for teaching and sharing this with me ... I love you ... ~
For the "Contest Check inside to see by Riftkin" Contest ...
Here was the object:
"Okay poets here is your challenge
If you think you are up to it.
Write a poem listing all the things
you are looking for in a perfect life partner.
Place them here for all of AP to see.
In just what order do you look
for that perfect one to fulfill your life.
Please no more than 30 lines.
If you have to write ADULT,
make it sensual.. Though I do not
know why you should need to".
A contest entry
- Pumpkin Pie by GypsyEyes.
400 points, ended December 22, 2008, 38 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Check inside to see by Riftkin.
900 points, ended November 30, 2008, 17 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
How did it make you feel? What could I have done differently?
Comments
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very nicely written. I like the visuals in this one. I like the imagery. I like the flow and the word usage. All in all a good write all together. Thanks for sharing this with us and thanks for entering this into my contest
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Congrats on your trophy and on your expressions found in this piece, these words could be transferable, yet, maintaining their uniqueness
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I am glad you took the time to list all the things you are looking for in a partner.
To me the perfect partner would be one that is caring and understanding.
Riftkin
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Blissful......
Is this wonderful piece I am going to assume is written about your wife...You have captured the true meaning of mutual love and respect for one another and the joy of growing together yet remaining your own individual self along the journey of you lives together...Thanks for sharing this endearing love poem and may you and your wife continue to grow together yet individually!!!!~~~~Toni~~~~
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Very lovely.
Very soft,
sweet, wonderful.
lol All the best of the best in things to say about this little read. Thank you for sharing.
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Wonderful
This is truely a lovely poem
Very unique and spoken from the heart
Indeed finding true love is so grand
Wish you the very best in the contest
Take care
David
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This is beautiful and honest =)
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