Roadways lead to a simplistic paradise
Beyond the golden horizon
Love and attention are at the beckon
Of a perpetual guidance
Men and women quietly sing a praise
While the light is as soft as a nightingale
In a paradise that can be for all, in the house of the King of Kings
The golden leaves of the tree of life
Rustle before an indigo sky
Happiness and joy would bring about a pleasent memory
The creatures all have a smile
Friendship's soft embrace
Calling back to the creator above in the house of the King of Kings
Winds glide through the soft flowing fields
Outside the golden city
Lover hold each other in warm care
Without the stigma of sin
This warm light will never fade away
But will guide us forevermore
Into the halls beyond the infinite to the house of the King of Kings
A contest entry
- Spirituality Challenge by dustytiger.
900 points, ended November 29, 2008, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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My goodness this is beautiful
put together incredibly
love, love the ending
God bless you my friend...
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this is just beautiful, it has so much to say about what might lay ahead without making me think that there really is something better out there
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Very lyrical, peaceful; I like how the "lover(s?) hold each other in warm care/without the stigma of sin". Clearly drawn picture of a specific belief without any feeling of preaching or trying to sell. Well-done.
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