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If We Both Are Sleep, Then...?

Held up by silly string
midnight endeavors
for the most part
are a hellish thing.

But to my stark surprise
right into the centered core
lies a bevvy of prefabbed fun
from sun up to sun rise.

So I won't ever be complaining
this is just too dog gone neat...



Author notes

prompt: but I never felt so awake...


This is the last too lines of my poem, hahhaa, this is a midnight write done in the noonday hours, so hence the over the 50 word limit...this is the fine print that some would rather not share hahha but I'm sleepy so...


a person gets to shiny/shimmy
under a dry spot while its raining.

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  • written-in-ink
    December 6, 2008
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    thank you
    i love it

    thank you and good luck