Alone, lost, never to be found
I await to be lifted off the ground,
Nowhere to go or to hide or run,
I'am sick of this its not any fun,
Life isant ending,I'am done pretending
I want it over with,right now and here
I look and the mirror and see no smile
Mother says it will be awhile,
Befor i can go and leave this world,
Her please haunt my dreams,
Begging me to stay,
That I'll have more fun if I go out and play,
But i alwas nod no,thats no way to go,
To stay somewhere you dont want to be,
Please dont force this on me,
I dont want to be here,
I dont want to stay,
I dont want to wait for santas sleigh,
I just want to run,
Get out of here now,
For this life is not what i want,
I mean, just look around....
Author notes
dosent flow verry well but its my thoughts thrown on paper..
A contest entry
- Emotions by cheeku.
400 points, ended December 5, 2008, 14 entries
Honorable mention
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It feels like you just want to sprout thin little wings and drift out into the cosmos and see the wonders of creation that are far beyond the imagination of the human mind, and become as distant as physcially (and emotionally) possible from this world.
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Very well done, and very sad. I hope you can realize the good in this world sometime soon, you are a very talented writer. I loved every aspect of this poem, your emotions are so strong, thank you so much for your entry!
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Thank you, and i do see the good its just the bad is eiser to write about
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Ahh, i see I understand what you mean. There is a certain beauty in sad poems, and you mastered that in this poem=]
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thank you, i wish i could write as good as the poeple who enterd yer contest though there all such good riters
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So are you!!! and you do write as good as them, that is why its taking me so long to try to come up with winners. You have an amazing talent, you should embrace it, don't put yourself down, you are a great poet=]
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aw ty =)
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Your welcome=]
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ok =D sounds nice! lol
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I am sorry you feel so lost here
Have you thought about back at the time when you were happy and looked forward to your tomorrows .Look at photo books at the time when life was real and you had plans with friends and family . Now think of what has changed within this time to make you feel the way you feel today .
We can look at only the hard side of life or we can look beyond it and make it what we want it to be . I have been there myself and felt my mind refused to let me go beyond the thoughts of loss and a place where I couldnt find the joys I once knew .But you can for dont you see you are the keeper of your soul you can norish it and see that it is where love and laughter resides or you cn refuse it this joy and lock yourself in and think only thoughts of woe . The way of life is in our own control so why deny yourself one of love for once you find it believe me you will never let it go and you will thankyourself for it in thwe long run .
Talk to me of these feelings and maybe together we can find out why this has happened and can understand what it is that will help you see that smile within the one you have refused tyourself to display .Talk to me Im here
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Thank you
~smiles~ ok i ll talkand thanks for the long comments its good to be able to read hope =)
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