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But he said he loves me


...but he says he loves me

and I'm lying here in the discontent staining our sheets
trying to reconcile what is love
and what is being left on the playground

is he truly ready to be my one?
to be the one that has to accept responsibility
for anything(one) that may come along?

peering through half-closed eyes,
I am trying to decipher
what is real, and what is a lover's lullaby

that false sense of security shall surely be the death of me

the turn of the head,
  the bounce of the hair,
the twinkle in the eyes
and giggles deep inside
are all these great indicators that I have a keeper

but does he love me?

he said that he does...

and at this time,

I

  choose

      to

        believe

            him...


even though I know it isn't true


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  • innocence jaded.xx
    November 27, 2008

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    Wow. I had to take a deep breath after reading this poem;; especially the last part: "I choose to believe in him...even though I know it isn't true." Beautiful. Thanks for entering & good luck