A faint childs voice reaches out to santas sleigh,
please santa please I dont want to play,
I just want daddy to stay,
No toys nor books or cooking big feasts,
I just want my daddy not to be such a beast,
cant he stay remain with me,
Mommys crying under the crissmass tree,
please santa please,
bring my daddy home to me.
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Moving
Thank you for your excellent, heartfelt entry.
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your welcome, and thank you
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Awww... Beautiful and Sad... an honest simple voice of a child .... very touching ..
Thanks for your entry.. and Good Luck!!!
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thank you!
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That was really sad.
I loved the flow of your poem, it was brilliant and the whole thing was really sad/cute. Good luck in the contest. -
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Thank you
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So beautiful, it was very touching to read that and I just felt so sad as I read each line of it. Wonderful, truely. It touches so many heart of that I am sure. <3
Much love
~Noor
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Excellent work here
I love the whole thing it was so smooth and with such feeling I love it . LOVE IT and thats the truth
Bravo honey
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Thank you, i kinda relate to this poem only kinda though lol
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Excellent work here
I love the whole thing it was so smooth and with such feeling I love it . LOVE IT and thats the truth
Bravo honey
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