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Perfect Mate.(Hay(na)ku)

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  • Riftkin gold member
    November 30, 2008

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    I am glad you took the time to list all the things you are looking for in a partner.
    To me the perfect partner would be one that is caring and understanding.

    Riftkin


  • everyone1 gold member
    November 22, 2008
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    Simple ...

    unconditional, well defined;- beautiful ...

    ~ James ~


  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    November 22, 2008

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    I am not familiar with haynaku, i know haiku and senryu, but not this...but it is lovely...good luck

    ♥
    whisper