Today I stopped
to buy you flowers,
tomorrow
taking you
on road with love poems billboards,
anxious to reach my destination,
parking at the wedding chapel
in your heart.
Author notes
prompt: almost there
A contest entry
- almost there by going nowhere.
900 points, ended November 23, 2008, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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interwining metaphor with imagery.. perfect on prompt. i like where this went... literally
haha
thank you -
a wonderful take ont he promt the depth of emotions are outstanding and reflect the promt very powerfully good luck inthe contest my friend
maralisa
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It is very romantic and though short, it contains within it all that it needs to paint a perfect picture of the emotion and the intent.
Good write.
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very nice, subtle and alive! great write. best of luck!
peace...ocean. -
this is cute. just imagine waiting there till you get to me lool
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Awe!!!! This is so sweet and very well written
Good luck in the contest 
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