Yes you’ve got me wondering
got a mind full of questions
and all a man can do is ask
what are all your manifestations
Critical is not the question
but it does make a lot of sense
what can you say to change that
I’m not interested in your nonsense
I was a player but the game is done
I want a lot more than that
if you feel you have what it takes
I want a lot more than that
Honesty is trust, not lust
making my way through a menagerie
of all that fall into the fold
to find the simple girl that sees me
A contest entry
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900 points, ended November 30, 2008, 17 entries
Gold trophy winner
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I am glad you took the time to list all the things you are looking for in a partner.
To me the perfect partner would be one that is caring and understanding.
Riftkin
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Thank you very much, congrats to all, my best wishes always.
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such beautiful words sound like a song to me when I read them.....poetic lyric's...of a man searching for a real lady......excellent write...
novy
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Thank you, my best wishes.
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True ...
... openly shared ...
My prayer for you is the hope I pray you may receive ...
Peace to you friend ...
Hold on ... she is out there, with heart in hand, looking, for you too ...
Very well written ...
~ James ~
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