God?
Hey, I know you're busy.
I mean, you have a million others
Screaming your name about right now.
Are you there? Can you hear me?
Yeah, down here. I'm sitting on my knees
With tears coming out of my eyes.
Can you spare a little time?
Author notes
prompt: Oh God, please spare little time for me.
the first thought was "please spare A little time for me" and I ran with it. I know I could probably write for "please spare little time for me" as well.
A contest entry
- please spare little time... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
400 points, ended December 6, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - round one (for everyone) prewrite contest ENTER ENTER ENTER (AND YES THAT MEAN'S YOU too by serenity silvermoon.
927 points, ended February 16, 1509 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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This was so sweet and so heart wrenching. someone crying out for a little of the Lords time. I loved this and am going to bookmark it. It says a lot. This person seems to be so in need of an ear and is crying out just to be heard. Fantastic. The very best of luck in the contest.
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wow thanks. i appreciate that.
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Ah..very much heartfelt poetry you crafted by the soul of yours..thanks for sharing it..well done..
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Cute, what we all would think as we Praise, Worship and Pray to Him...refreshing write, Blessings.
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WOW...a prayer in absolute plain talk...LOVE IT!...Hope this does well in the contest. Best of luck! Peace, Rhonda
As an afterthought...I wonder why we always feel HE is UP and we are down...if HE is IN all things...hmmmm...I love poems that make me look harder and deeper..thanks for sharing. Good instincts, following your first thought!
R.
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