I hear the rocks at my window
you're in the rain on the sidewalk and
you're not going untill I come outside
You're asking if I'm with you
I'm Checking Yes, Romeo
There you are wishing, wanting, waiting.
mine for the taking
I'm sneaking out,
not telling a soul goodbye
I'm Checking Yes Romeo
3...2...1 I'm falling in your arms
We're Runing Baby, Run
Forever we'll be
With you by my side
the world looks that much brighter
Never looking back,
we'll never let me tear us apart
You're asking if I'm with you
I'm Checking Yes Romeo
Author notes
Option #2, write a poem about We the King's Check Yes Juliet
i wrote a responce to the song, whats going on in Juliet's head as Romeo sings this song to her, this is one of my favorite songs of all time (:
A contest entry
- Romeo and Juliet Contest by misshugglebugglez.
626 points, ended November 23, 2008, 15 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Wow, this is a fantastic,poem, congratulations on a much deserved trophy.
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ahhh, this was beautifully written and was just so awesome!!!! as i stated in the contest, i absolutely love that song! thanks for entering!!!!!! i reallly realy really enjoyed reading your poem. good luck!!!!
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<3 thank you so much for the gold (:
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you are very welcome =)
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You wrote a love poem, about a love story. ironic, and good
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