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Whatever You Did Was Perfect.

I wouldn't change a thing for whatever has happened,
i don't have the power to but i just accept it when it was fastened,
the life and the curse that had fallen upon it i fought it,
life is not fair how thy thought i would've bought it,
but they were all too wrong i know am wiser now,
there is just too much that i know,
i wont spend my rime pondering on emptiness,
but i love my love and always wished of happiness,
which reminds me of my wishes which were all vapor,
the taste was sour and the world like a viper,
but i stood firm for what i beleaved and had faith,
especially on the love that i had felt and roses that i wished,
things were washed away when the rain came,
but the visions and dreams and my love stayed the same,
sometimes we might go insane,
we all are humans and i take every one of us special,
so am not that too special but whatever it comes let it be,
and i wouldn't ask you to spare any time ill just bear it the way i could see,
to the uppermost of my strength inside of me.

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    November 29, 2008
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    Humm..very thoughtful and very logical sentiments you have crafted here ..love it..well done...


  • Girl-Interrupted gold member
    November 26, 2008

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    this poem says a lot...i love the words you used.. you placed them in just the right places...the phrase...uppermost of my strength inside of me... says it all.... you are a strong person....great piece!

    becca