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God, Have you any spare time?

Oh God !
please spare little time for me...
I'm sure this is not how it's meant to be.
We vowed to stay together
Forever and ever.
I now need your guidence and strength
I have sunken too low
Far behond repair.
Oh god, won't you listen
Am i not good enough to be a christian.
Afterall you had made me
Won't you set me free?

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    November 29, 2008

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    Definately HE will set you free..HE loves you..loves everyone..your poetry is very deep and very much impressive as well..well done..


  • poetrandy
    November 23, 2008

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    A touching, well written poem! A message that is both sad and rejoiceful! The confusion here seems to be remarkable and reassuring! Good work and I like this poem, a lot!